Finished

I have officially ended reading Alex's story. I was so sad at the end, it was just so touching. You can tell a good writer when they make you sad for someone you've hated for half the book. I would like a little more details in some part, though. Like what some of the characters look like and such. And a little editing would do it some good. I loved the Jess-Kel Relationship. It seemed so natural. One question: who was Caron? I don't remember him. Lily and Lola's old age is starting to show. It seems like they have kind of switched personalities almost. Lola's all over the place, coming into a room as soon as you call her, while Lily's been having trouble getting off the couch, she's getting lazy. It doesn't really concern me, though, because they are turning ten this year, so it's natural that they should be a little lazier. This year in school I'm taking up Italian and Latin, because one of my dreams is to one day go to Italy, which I could probably get into a program to do once I've learned the language well. Got to go for now, Lucheta PS My Sister Clare is coming home in eight days!